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I Just Want To Know If The Public Would Find This Good? |
Question by Dayakar P | Posted in Books & Authors
I've made a allegory called Blood Apple and this is the plot, (hope u like it):
Thomas Applegate was unquestionably the best attorney in New York City living a life at norm, when he falls into a web of epic proportions. He falls in inamorata
| Answer: This assertion has a lot of potential with sci-fi and horror buffs (like me woo!) but you seriously need to check up on use of past/aid tenses. Things like had/has in sentences throw the synopsis completely out of whack. If you would like I can copy-edit |